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June McIntyre-Georgia's avatar

Chuckled that the last sentence was grammatically correct and a big lie.

Thank you for writing.

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David and  Jo's avatar

Loved the editing

Reminds me of my favourite good writing book which I’m sure you would have read.

Dreyer’s English - an utterly correct guide to clarity and style by Benjamin Dreyer

He made editing amusing, and after 70 years I finally understood some of the rules!

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Jesse Osmun's avatar

The editing is amazing..Kristi should hire you, just don't bring your dog to work because you know..Annie Oakley ..

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